Twanda Beckers
Wednesday, August 17, 2011
Review my story please? :)?
This is pretty good ! maybe you shouldn't rush in with her having an angry outburst at her father so early on ,it doesn't quite work :) But seriously apart from that really interesting ,also i live in south port so its cool to read about it x
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